KİNDS OF POPULAR MUSİC STYLES
Music is common point all the community.Includes many types and styles.Musics are carries diffrent mean and listened to music for many years.Musics are a lot opinion and idea use for.Most popular kinds are pop,rock and arabesque.
In the first kind of popular music,for instance.Pop music is hit and this kind appear 1940s all the world.Remains popular for many years.First Pioneer is Billy Haley.Popular music is two giant group are Rolling Stones and Pink Floyd. This style spread even farther. Various instruments are differentiated in this style. Today as the club version of pop music diversified. This popular music style life continue for years.
In the second style of rock music. Rock music more for young people. Namely, this style for the young generation make composing. Rock, in the 20th century has emerged. Usually electric guitar, bass guitar, keyboards and drums with the species. Rock music done with group. Rock and Roll is important to the initiation of flow rock music. Rock music is directly influenced by the type of Blues music. Rock artists of the 1950s Dam Philips,Jackie Brenston, Elvis Presley, Chuck Berry, gene Vincent and other.The development of British rock in the 1960s ‘rock music’ has become widespead. Here are some emerging artists in rock music until the period of 1970:The Shadows, Bob Dylan, the Beatles and others. After the hard rock ,heavy metal music and the words that harden and exits completely.
Thirdly,there is the arabesk music. Arabesque, an oriental type of music. Always an emotional subject of the lyrics and creates divisions. Arabesque music is a part of Turkish music. Turkey in the 1940s for the first time this kind with Haydar Tatlıyay and a few other singer emerged. After a little more evolved than this kind in Turkey. Arabesque which famous for some of the singers: İbrahim Tatlıses, Müslüm Gürses, Orhan Gencebay and others.
In conclusion , new styles and genres will emerge as the years progressed. There also will be popular and listen to loved. New generations are adopt new style.
Hi Merve,
YanıtlaSilnice to read your essay. I like your topic. here are my comments for your essay:
firstly your introduction paragraph. you have startd from general to specific, it is nice. however, is your topic "popular kinds of music in Turkey or around the world"? I think you should mention it in your thesis statement.
when it comes to your body paragraphs, I can say that you have written informative paragraphs. however, if you are talking about music in Turkey, it would be better to talk about these music types in Turkey. for example, you can write groups or singers that are popular in that music in Turkey. you talked about popular groups in the world in two paragraphs and in Turkey in one paragraph. I think there is a problem there.
your conclusion paragrahp is also good, but I think you should add the three types mentioned above. you can say "pop, rock and arabesque are the most popular music types in Turkey" etc.
there are some problems with sentence structures:
ıt includes many types and styles. each kind of music carry a different meaning and a various types of music has been listened for many years.
Musics are a lot opinion and idea use for??
the first music type is pop music. you don't need to use for instance in your topic sentence.
the second type is rock.
This popular music style has continued for years.
Usually electric guitar, bass guitar, keyboards and drums are used in this kind of music.
after a little, this kind evolved more in Turkey.
Arabesque is famous for some singers: ...
There also will be popular and listen to loved?
anyway, your essay is really successful in terms of content and organization. please, pat attention to the point I highlighted above:)